图画式作文

图画式作文的写作以2015年6月CET-4真题（第二套）为例进行探讨。

2015年6月CET-4真题（第二套）

Directions：For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comm ent on this kind of modern life.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

7.3.1　审题

当看到以上作文题目时,考生应该得到以下信息。

1.确定作文类型是图画式作文。

2.三段式作文：

第一段描述图画；

第二段评价这种现代生活；

第三段个人建议。

3.作文词数不得少于120词,不得多于180词。

7.3.2　参考范文及作文思路点津

7.3.3　范文亮点解析

1.用过渡词等手段增强衔接。

第一段：

（1）As is presented in the series of cartoons,

（2）and above those cartoons reads.

（3）Apparently,what the cartoons try to convey is.

第二段：

（1）Firstly,

（2）Moreover,

（3）Finally,

第三段：

（1）As far as I am concerned,it is high time we.

（2）On the one hand,

（3）On the other hand,

2.亮点词汇及表达。

（1）be indulged in

（2）absolute dominance

（3）concern

（4）hardly

（5）bring about

（6）worsen

（7）along with

（8）specifically

（9）an increasing number of

（10）suffer from

（11）available

（12）be unwilling to

（13）communicate with

（14）be detrimental to

（15）personal development

（16）keep.from

（17）excessively

（18）intelligent trackers

（19）stay away from

（20）promising

3.亮点语法表达。

（1）that引导的同位语从句；

（2）which引导的非限定性定语从句；

（3）it is high time引导的虚拟语气；

（4）Only引导方式状语置于句首引起部分倒装结构。

7.3.4　万能句式拓展

描述图画的句式：

1.As is vividly shown/described/depicted/portrayed in the cartoon/picture,

2.Indicated above is a picture that vividly describes.

3.Basically,what we can see from the cartoon is that.

描述图画细节的句式：

1.It can be seen in the picture that.

2.In the picture,

3.Specifically,

点明图画主题的句式：

1.Obviously,

2.The picture indicates/conveys the meaning that.

3.The purpose of the picture is to show that.