给提纲式作文的写作以2012年6月CET-4真题为例进行探讨。
2012年6月CET-4真题
Directions：For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay entitled
On Excessive Packagingfollowing the outline given below.You should write at least 120words but no more than 180words.
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象。
2.出现这一现象的原因。
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议。
7.1.1 审题
当看到以上作文题目时,考生应该得到以下信息。
1.作文题目On Excessive Packaging已给出,不需另行命名,同时作文主题是过度包装。
2.三段式作文,每段一一对应给出的汉语提纲,即：
第一段描写“目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象”；
第二段分析“出现这一现象的原因”；
第三段提出“我对这一现象的看法和建议”。
3.作文词数不得少于120词,不得多于180词。
7.1.2 参考范文及作文思路点津
7.1.3 范文亮点解析
1.用过渡词等手段增强衔接。
第一段：
（1）a common phenomenon nowadays.
（2）For instance,
第二段：
（1）Many reasons account for this problem.
（2）To begin with,
（3）In addition,
（4）Last but not least,
第三段：
（1）Personally,I.
（2）First,
（3）Second,
2.亮点词汇及表达。
（1）attach great importance to
（2）for the sole purpose of
（3）pay little attention to
（4）driven by
（5）have demands for
（6）give rise to
（7）catch one's eyes
（8）oppose
（9）give top priority to
（10）advocate
3.亮点语法表达。
（2）it is advisable that从句使用虚拟语气；
（3）Only引导方式状语置于句首引起部分倒装结构。
7.1.4 万能句式拓展
提出社会现象的句式拓展：
1..has become a common phenomenon nowadays.
2.The debate these days draws our attention to whether.
3.Nowadays.has gained great popularity among more and more.
4.Many nations have been faced with the problem of.
5.Recently（the problem）.has been brought into focus.
6.Recently（the phenomenon）.has become a heated topic.
7.Recently（the issue）.has aroused great concern among.
8.Nowadays there is a growing concern over.
9.Today,people in growing numbers are beginning to realize the seriousness of the prevalence of.
举例的句式：
1.For example,
2.For instance,
3.A good case in point is.
4.As an illustration,we may take.
5.Such examples might be given easily.
6..is often cited as an example.
提出原因的句式：
1.Many factors are accountable/responsible for this situation/problem.
2.A number of factors might contribute to/lead to/account for the phenomenon.
3.The answer to this problem involves many factors.
4.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that.
5.The factors that contribute to this situation include.
6.There are widespread reasons for it and the primary ones are listed as follows.
表示逻辑顺序的表达：
首先、第一：Firstly,First,In the first place,To begin/start with,First and foremost
其次、第二：Secondly,Second,In addition,Furthermore,What's more,Also,Moreover,Meanwhile,Besides
再次、最后、第三：Finally/Eventually,At last,Last but not least,Thirdly,Third
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