英语书面表达写作教程

【2016·全国新课标I】书面表达

  假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）

注意：

    1. 词数100左右;

    2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my planfor the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

In order to get some practical experience, I am planning totake a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I havealready finished myapplication and resume. But this is the first time that I have written anapplication and the personals resume, so I don’t know if there are something topay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me somehelp. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.

Looking forward to your reply.  And I’d be really thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结速语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。